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The Color Of The Inside Of My Mouth MAG

January 22, 2009
By Bassoonkelley GOLD, Tampa, Florida
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I wipe at my stupid eyes with the back of my hand, and it startles me for a second that my tears are gray. I dunno why it surprised me; I mean, I buy the s***ty mascara that’s $1.99 in the 20 Items or Less checkout lane. Why spend oodles of green on something I hardly ever use?

I just wanted to look nice, you know? Like those girls who’re just naturally fake pretty. The girls who can blend shades of eyeshadow like no one’s business, and match their lipstick to the exact color of their toenail polish or whatever. Seemingly effortless, yet impeccably coordinated.

This is good stuff, I should write for a living – solely on the subject of beauty queens with superiority complexes, of course.

I just want … God, what do I want? I want to feel the sun on my face and paint the clouds and hear the music in the trees and love myself and love someone else and just feel perpetually beautiful.

But that requires the $14.99 waterproof, fire-retardant, Grade-5-hurricane-resistant mascara, not the tube that’s two bucks in Lane 4.

My shoes are dirty and outdated, but that’s how I like them. I like these shoes. They’re comfortable. Why do I need new, expensive, fashionably appealing shoes in order for someone to say, “Hey dogg, you look nice today”?

And why is it that whenever I get deathly bored and slather cheap, pore-clogging makeup all over my face everyone suddenly says, “Wow, you look pretty!”? Since when is “pretty” about whale blubber and cocoa butter?

I’ll tell you one thing, though. I most definitely am not crying about some stupid XY.

Definitely not.

I’m crying for all the whales that have to give up their fatty insulation so that some fugly anorexic super bitch can paint herself pretty every freaking day, giving him something halfway decent to oggle all the time.

Seriously, I’m not leaking saltwater over a guy.

I just think it’s cruel and unfair that the fat-endowed marine life population doesn’t even get the slightest warning that they’ll soon be on a cosmetics endcap at K-Mart.

He could have at least broken it to me gently, you know? We’ve been friends since the George Bush/Al Gore debacle.

I mean come the Bette Midler on.

I spill my blood, guts, and viscera out to this guy and he throws down the “Let’s just be friends” card without a second thought?

It’s just … it’s common courtesy to ease someone into heartbreak, not smash it over their head like a whiffleball bat.

You know what? I’m going to take my $1.99 checkout Lane 4 mascara and chuck it right at her big, stupid square head.

© Anna H., Buckeye, AZ

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This is literally an excerpt from my journal, so it's a little different when it comes to writing style.
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Def_Leppard_fan120 SILVER said...
on Jan. 7 2012 at 1:11 am
Def_Leppard_fan120 SILVER, Lake Lorane, Florida
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If you want your dreams to come true, Make them come true. If you want to win, Make it a win. <br /> The only one that is stopping you from accomplish your dreams is YOU.

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Come check out my article called THE BATTLE and comment on what you thought about it.
duckypoodle said...
on Jan. 3 2012 at 4:33 pm
The one guy I ever poured myself out too was actually understanding. That gives me confidence, because after reading everything that other girls go through, I was scared to tell him. But, you know, you just gotta go through with it, because even though this guy didn't like me, he still hung out with me and joked. And makeup is seriously for people who need confidence. Those who have confidence don't need makeup.
BlueRain BRONZE said...
on Dec. 16 2011 at 6:16 pm
BlueRain BRONZE, Clarkston, Michigan
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&quot;Meeting you was fate, becoming your friend was a choice, but falling in love with you was beyond my control.&quot;

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The sad part is is that when they say "Let's be friends", that really means "Okay, I know you, but it's too weird to talk anymore because.. well... yeah, so let's go be on separate universes and then be all surprised when I realize halfway through the school year that you share a class or two with me."

Well, that's what they're usually thinking. But with less courtesy.

Loftus GOLD said...
on Dec. 16 2011 at 4:11 pm
Loftus GOLD, Ocoee, Florida
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This is pretty good. I really enjoyed this. I also love the title. Keep adding stuff from your journal! 
NicoleAnn BRONZE said...
on Dec. 16 2011 at 3:22 pm
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Wow This Is Really Good I Think You Should Make This Into A Series Or Something Like That Or Maybe Try To Publish It I Seriouslly Would Buy This If You Made It Into A Book Or Series :)
nolanje80 PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 16 2011 at 1:58 pm
nolanje80 PLATINUM, Kalispell, Montana
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&ldquo;When you&#039;re dreaming with a broken heart <br /> The waking up is the hardest part <br /> You roll outta bed and down on your knees <br /> And for a moment you can hardly breathe&rdquo; <br /> ― John Mayer

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i agree with blueeyedgirl18. this also sounds like my journal. and i get where you are coming from ont he fact that soo many guys play the "i just want to be friends" card even aftr you tell him all your idrty little secrets. how is that at all fair?
Blueeyedgirl18 GOLD said...
on Dec. 16 2011 at 12:32 pm
Blueeyedgirl18 GOLD, Kulpmont, Pennsylvania
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This sounds like my diary:) lol I love it:)
MarissaWhitecloud SILVER said...
on Dec. 16 2011 at 11:04 am
MarissaWhitecloud SILVER, Oskaloosa, Iowa
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A little mean but I loved it. You're really good at writing.
Adnama BRONZE said...
on Dec. 16 2011 at 9:50 am
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I really love this because it is true about a whole bunch of people including myself.  This just comes out and speaks the truth.
FatesMistake13 said...
on Nov. 27 2011 at 9:31 pm
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&quot;Most people die of a sort of creeping common sense, and discover when it is too late that the only things one never regrets are one&#039;s mistakes.&quot; Oscar Wilde <br /> <br /> &quot;The books that the world calls immoral are books that show the world its own shame.&quot;

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ahhh love it!
mylifestoryonmywrist BRONZE said...
on Nov. 24 2011 at 8:32 pm
mylifestoryonmywrist BRONZE, West Monroe, Louisiana
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&ldquo;So I walked back to my room and collapsed on the bottom bunk, thinking that if people were rain, I was drizzle and she was a hurricane.&rdquo; <br /> ― John Green, Looking for Alaska

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I laughed at the part where you said, like the girls who are naturally fake pretty. 
Dino-chan BRONZE said...
on Nov. 24 2011 at 6:20 pm
Dino-chan BRONZE, Wentzville, Missouri
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it seemed incompleat for some reason
harrypotter143 said...
on Nov. 24 2011 at 3:14 pm
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Since everybody is an individual, nobody can be you. You are unique. No one can tell you how to use your time. It is yours. Your life is your own. You mold it. You make it. <br /> <br /> ~ Eleanor Roosevelt &hearts;*

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wow. i mean, really, wow. (:

 

fantastic story!! it totally got to me ! you just explained my life :$

XxkierstanxX BRONZE said...
on Nov. 24 2011 at 11:42 am
XxkierstanxX BRONZE, Douglassville, Pennsylvania
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i have lots but my favorites are by me <br /> <br /> Hate may be a strong word but LOVE is even stronger<br /> i have more bu i dnt remember them xD there was like twoo more

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agreed great story haha
prettylittlewriter BRONZE said...
on Nov. 24 2011 at 10:47 am
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Wow, this is very heartfelt and very good writing
starlightstarbright PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 24 2011 at 10:20 am
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I apologize. In the first line, that was supposed to be "itself", not "it said."
starlightstarbright PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 24 2011 at 10:17 am
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&quot;Some of you may have taken history or civics classes that outlined the freedoms one expects in a democracy. At the heart of those freedoms is choice... With an affirmative choice, all democracy vanishes.&quot;

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"Fear of a word increases fear of the thing it said." -Albus Dumbledore, correct me if I'm wrong. Her "explicit wording" gives strength to her language, raw emotion to her story. If you read her little info post, this is an excerpt from her journal. Why would she moderate her language in a jornal? If you wish to read something without swears, don't even bother touching classic literature. A writer needs passion, and the words - ALL words- supply it to her.
jobros4eva said...
on Nov. 24 2011 at 9:55 am

PLEASE DON'T READ THIS. YOU WILL BE KISSED ON THE NEAREST FRIDAY BY THE ONE YOU LOVE. NOW YOU'VE STARTED READING THIS SO DON'T STOP.

THIS IS REALLY FREAKY!!!

1)say your name 10 times

2)say your mom's name 5 times

3)say your crush's name 3 times

4)paste this on 4 other posts. if you do this your crush will kiss you on the nearest friday. if you don't do this after reading this you will get bad luck

send this to 4 other post in 143 minutes when done press F6 and the name of your crush will appear on the screen in big letters

Tcoolgirl BRONZE said...
on Nov. 2 2011 at 4:45 pm
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It's good! :)
Malloy213 said...
on Nov. 2 2011 at 2:01 pm
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All I can say is that this story is amazing