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My Snow Adventure

July 8, 2009
By Daisygirl18 BRONZE, Flower Town, Florida
Daisygirl18 BRONZE, Flower Town, Florida
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My Snow Adventure
Little angels
Falling fast
Down, down, down
On to my tongue
And on to the ground
Fall back
Onto the cloud of snow
Arms flapping
Legs swinging
Becoming a snow angel
Not just in the snow,
In real life
We spin
We fall
Laughing
Being called inside
I wave goodbye
She waves back
Then flies upwards
Alone once again
I run inside
Never forgetting
My snow adventure

The author's comments:
I wrote this for school with two other poems. I got a 96%.

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mj357 said...
on Jul. 10 2009 at 9:06 pm
i'm not trying to be rude but shouldn't you put this under poetry?