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Underneath

October 24, 2014
By Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
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Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
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"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

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Underneath
these dripping worn out lies
is a girl with tear stained blue-green eyes.
She doesn’t speak anymore
Tired of crying
at the door.

© Samantha H., Savannah, GA

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You're beautiful. I don't know if anyone's ever told you, but you are :)

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Nightingale74 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 17 2014 at 10:58 am
Nightingale74 PLATINUM, Beavercreek, Ohio
46 articles 0 photos 152 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;When you need something to believe in, believe in yourself.&quot;<br /> &quot;A poem unwritten is only a thought; unshared, unsaid...&quot;

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It's my pleasure to comment on your work, Liv :) And thank you for your wonderful words and for the great deal of thought and emotion that you put into them! ;)
Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on Nov. 16 2014 at 8:20 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
325 articles 10 photos 1165 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

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Your comments truly make my day! Thank you for your kind words with wonderful thought put into them :)
Nightingale74 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 15 2014 at 8:09 pm
Nightingale74 PLATINUM, Beavercreek, Ohio
46 articles 0 photos 152 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;When you need something to believe in, believe in yourself.&quot;<br /> &quot;A poem unwritten is only a thought; unshared, unsaid...&quot;

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What I love about this poem, is that it can be taken in so many different directions; it can be related to so many different emotions and feelings. I especially loved the line "a girl with tear stained blue-green eyes," the imagery was beautiful and it evokes so much emotion in the reader. Phenomenal work!!!
Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on Nov. 13 2014 at 5:07 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
325 articles 10 photos 1165 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

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Thanks! I'm really glad you found it relatable :)
Nelly_Nell GOLD said...
on Nov. 13 2014 at 1:49 am
Nelly_Nell GOLD, Bakersfield, California
11 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
&#039;&#039; For every dark night there is an even brighter day&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -Tupac Shukar

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I love this poem especially because I can relate to it in so many ways.