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Divine Vine
February 9, 2009
"Divine Vine"
Way back in the trees,
If you go, you can find
All the old memories
On the great swinging vine.
It hangs from the sky
In a resolute way
And it's almost too high
For the children to play.
It drops to your grip
If you want nothing more,
But it drops to your hip
If you've been there before.
The rock where you leap
Has a lake far below.
There's a feeling to keep
Like a love long ago.
And when it's your turn
If you just close your eyes,
You will have no concern;
Then away to the skies!
You soar like a missile,
Way up through the trees
And you'll hear a faint whistle
While swinging at ease.
At last when you face
The right time to let go,
You will drift all through space
To the calm lake below.
You will fly through the air
To your meteor crash,
Then the still lake will tear
With a tidal wave splash.
© Jennifer T., Hanson, MA
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This article has 52 comments.
TravelinT said...
on Mar. 19 2009 at 12:49 am
this is absolutly amazing. i love it. it has GREAT imagery and wonderful rhyming. i lovelovelove it.
[email protected] GOLD said...
on Mar. 1 2009 at 6:48 am
nice peom!! nice writing!!
iheartvolleyball said...
on Feb. 27 2009 at 6:56 pm
hi. great poem
i love the rhyming and the imagery
keep it up =]
it would be awesome if you could read my poems @
TeenInk.com/raw/Poetry/article/85804/Divine-Vine/
TeenInk.com/raw/Poetry/article/86012/The-Real-World/
thanks
i love the rhyming and the imagery
keep it up =]
it would be awesome if you could read my poems @
TeenInk.com/raw/Poetry/article/85804/Divine-Vine/
TeenInk.com/raw/Poetry/article/86012/The-Real-World/
thanks
iheartvolleyball said...
on Feb. 27 2009 at 6:50 pm
hey that's really good
i loved the rhyming and the imagery
keep it up =]
i loved the rhyming and the imagery
keep it up =]
Duckie430 said...
on Feb. 27 2009 at 2:06 pm
good poem. great imagery. keep writing; you definately have talent.
E-Fizzle said...
on Feb. 27 2009 at 12:38 am
:D I'm from Y/A. Good luck with it getting published! 5 stars!! :D
Diane M said...
on Feb. 27 2009 at 12:34 am
I forgot to add my rating on my comment! I definitely give it a 5 !
Amerz said...
on Feb. 27 2009 at 12:34 am
honestly,i think this is a great poems.the messages n moments really come to the reader.i mean the readers can feel what the persona is feeling.this author really have talent in writing poems.So good luck.
on Feb. 27 2009 at 12:30 am
AWESOMENESS! Keep up the good work and good luck :D
darkness45643 said...
on Feb. 27 2009 at 12:27 am
this is good stuff. good rhymes, it's kind of relaxing really. good work! hope it gets published! 5
violentandyoung said...
on Feb. 27 2009 at 12:27 am
This is a really lovely poem.
I like the smooth, flowy rythm of it.
I like the smooth, flowy rythm of it.
elkgond1 said...
on Feb. 27 2009 at 12:26 am
That poem is has all the right stuff.
Great work. Hard to believe it was a teenager.
Great work. Hard to believe it was a teenager.
Lauratomp84 said...
on Feb. 27 2009 at 12:26 am
Great Poem... 5 stars!!!
Note2Self said...
on Feb. 27 2009 at 12:26 am
That's really good. I love how it rhymes and there's a pretty good beat to it as well.
~N2S
~N2S
Lucy said...
on Feb. 27 2009 at 12:26 am
Really good, I loved the intricate descriptions of stuff. 5 Stars!
valleygirl141 said...
on Feb. 27 2009 at 12:26 am
I like it. Great imagery.
12 holidays said...
on Feb. 27 2009 at 12:25 am
Wow! this is really great. i am a big fan of poetry and it really allows people to share how they feel and i think in this poem you did exactly that. i really think that you are a great writer with a lot potential and i hope that you can continue to write.
Dixie said...
on Feb. 27 2009 at 12:25 am
I really like it. I'm from Yahoo by the way. It is very interesting, and I like the ending too. Good job!
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Diane M said...
on Feb. 27 2009 at 12:25 am
I think it's very good, and very creative writing.
strikethematch said...
on Feb. 27 2009 at 12:25 am
What a beautiful poem! Well done!
