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Rain in the West

August 23, 2011
By ChocoMint SILVER, Bloomington, Indiana
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ChocoMint SILVER, Bloomington, Indiana
7 articles 0 photos 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Love is like swallowing hot chocolate before it has cooled off. It takes you by surprise at first, but keeps you warm for a long time.&quot; - Anonymous <br /> <br /> &quot;Love starts with a smile, grows with a kiss and ends with a tear.&quot; - Anonymous

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Rain hear my cry
Rain grace my land
Rain reach my ears
Rain touch my hand

Rain loose your wrath
Rain open your door
Rain drench my back
Rain let it pour

Rain cease this ache
Rain quench my thirst
Rain end this sorrow
Rain stop this curse

Rain I hear you
Rain come close
Rain overhead
Rain like a ghost

Rain in the evening
Rain in my sight
Rain in the morning
Rain in the night

Rain never stopping
Rain always pounding
Rain beating hard
Rain so surrounding

Rain on the fields
Rain on the steer
Rain at my doorstep
Rain finally here

© Erin F., Farmingville, NY

The author's comments:
I love to write about nature and how it affects people. Tell me how well it flows and if you can feel the emotion in it.
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JoyfulCheers SILVER said...
on Oct. 4 2011 at 9:47 pm
JoyfulCheers SILVER, St. Croix Falls, Wisconsin
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smile at the world and it will smile back

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you are a great writer and your words just flow rite together. Keep up the work, you have alot of great talent!
dia.dreamer GOLD said...
on Sep. 11 2011 at 9:25 am
dia.dreamer GOLD, Kochi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I saw an angel in the marble and carved until I set him free.&quot; - Michelangelo<br /> &quot;I took a deep breath and listened to the old bray of my heart: I am, I am, I am.&quot; - Sylvia Plath

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I love how the rhythm is so perfect that it sort of sounds like the rhythmic patter of rain, though you might not have realized it. :) awesome job! I absolutely love nature too, and every one of my poems are based on nature. keep writing!
Garnet77 PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 10 2011 at 9:48 pm
Garnet77 PLATINUM, Sinagpore, Other
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&quot;Everything&#039;s a triangle.&quot; ~ My mother<br /> <br /> &quot;Write what you love, write what you care about, because sometimes, it&#039;s the easiest way to be heard.&quot;

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This is amazing! I love the repitition and the rhythm to this poem. Well done! :)
ChocoMint SILVER said...
on Sep. 9 2011 at 3:14 pm
ChocoMint SILVER, Bloomington, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Love is like swallowing hot chocolate before it has cooled off. It takes you by surprise at first, but keeps you warm for a long time.&quot; - Anonymous <br /> <br /> &quot;Love starts with a smile, grows with a kiss and ends with a tear.&quot; - Anonymous

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Thanks a lot.  I love to write and it's a wonderful feeling to know other people like your hard work.  <><  =+)
Saphirra BRONZE said...
on Sep. 9 2011 at 10:13 am
Saphirra BRONZE, Auburn, Pennsylvania
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&ldquo;Falling is just like flying except there&rsquo;s a more permanent destination.&rdquo; -Some person on Tumblr

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You are a very talented writer! I read your other work too, and all of them are amazing!  Keep up the amazing work! :D
Steph0804 GOLD said...
on Sep. 5 2011 at 7:15 am
Steph0804 GOLD, Seoul, Other
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This flowed really well! You should keep writing poetry!
ChocoMint SILVER said...
on Sep. 4 2011 at 7:40 pm
ChocoMint SILVER, Bloomington, Indiana
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Thank you so much.  =+)
Skylight said...
on Sep. 3 2011 at 10:04 am
Skylight, Hurst, Texas
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Wow, this is amazing! I really like how well it flowed, and I can feel the emotion in it! Never stop writing, ChocoMint. :)