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Unknown Passion

March 3, 2010
By Ladie2 BRONZE, Greenville, Alabama
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Ladie2 BRONZE, Greenville, Alabama
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You don't know who love you until they are gone.

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His love is passionate
And indescribable
The smile he gives me
Changes my mood
His touch defeats me
If defeats my love of cued.
I dream to dream of him
When the sun leaves me alone
My eyes are tightly shut
As I see us both in this zone
A zone of love
Us walking hand to hand
Watching the water
In our own made land.
as i am thinking in this dream
You have shown me so many things
I never had seen.
There is so much you give me
That I cannot return
Our unknown passion
Is my only concern

© Becky F., Sacramento, CA

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Ladie2 BRONZE said...
on Aug. 31 2010 at 6:45 pm
Ladie2 BRONZE, Greenville, Alabama
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thankyoo!!!
thewriteidea DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 30 2010 at 11:49 pm
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this has really great flow. your sentences are not choppy at all and that is a main point in a poem. flow matters a lot. you're a great writer!

check out some of my work, too if you'd like. great job on this! keep writing!!(: