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Love Me To Death

August 3, 2011
By WynterPage95 ELITE, Monticello, Arkansas
WynterPage95 ELITE, Monticello, Arkansas
164 articles 8 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's better to burn out than to fade away..." -Kurt Cobain


I've been so troubled for so long now,

And the pain's not even mine to feel.

I took your sorrow and made it mine,

You were just to weak.

Just too innocent.

Just too perfect.

But now it may have been too much for me,

Breathing feels like forever.

My psyche screams of agony,

But I love you too much.

I don't mind if our love destroys me.

I'll take all of your tears,

And use them to bathe away your scars.

You can't change my mind,

I'll kill myself before I let you falter.

You will live forever,

Even if it means that I will perish.

Just hold my hand,

I just want you to be alright.

Something as beautiful as you doesn't deserve pain,

No matter how many mistakes you've made.

You're just too perfect to die.

I love you so much,

I love you more than myself.

And you loved me to death.


The author's comments:
This was inspired by Evanescence's song, "Give Unto Me"

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on Oct. 8 2011 at 7:07 pm
WynterPage95 ELITE, Monticello, Arkansas
164 articles 8 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's better to burn out than to fade away..." -Kurt Cobain

Thanks for the awesome feedback, and you shouldn't destroy yourself...help them as much as you can, but never...NEVER lose yourself

on Oct. 8 2011 at 6:53 pm
billlover420 GOLD, Justin, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Boy, when you're dead, they really fix you up. I hope to hell when I do die somebody has sense enough to just dump me in the river or something. Anything except sticking me in a goddam cemetery.  People coming and putting a bunch of flowers on your stomach on Sunday, and all that crap. Who wants flowers when you're dead? Nobody. ~J.D. Salinger,The Catcher in the Rye,

what u wrote here makes me cry just alil its soo amazeing and makes me think of the girl i love she hurts soo bad by the guy she loves and i try to take it all aways shes to amazeing and perfrect to hurt they way she is hurt and i tryed to do the same with my ex till no matter what i did it wasnte working i wanted to save hom from himself . and i tryed be there so omuch for him that i dyed soo much inside