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The unseen Universe

October 2, 2012
By Garrett93 SILVER, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
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"Life is the childhood of our immortality" Johann Wolfgang von Goethe

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Music is a piercing ray of sunshine,
Music is a misty lake,
Music is an unexpected smile,
Music is a handwritten letter,
Music is the sultry scent of a midsummer night’s rain,
Music is an unlocked door,
From which our deepest sentiments,
Are sent forth in delicious technicolor.

Music is a universe in itself,
A universe where all is right,


A universe where all is beautiful and bright.

© Kimberly C., Houston, TX

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TraceBatWingsAndBrokenStrings DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 28 2012 at 2:41 pm
TraceBatWingsAndBrokenStrings DIAMOND, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
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I love how the title creates an air of mystery, and then you lead it into music. Also, the alliteration in the line "Music is the sultry scent of a midsummer nights rain." Was great, too. There are some fantastic images as well, like the aforementioned line about how music is the sultry scent of a midsummer nights rain. Good job.