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The Lasting Vow

December 1, 2013
By literaturepumpkin SILVER, Frederick, Maryland
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literaturepumpkin SILVER, Frederick, Maryland
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'Even for something good, it will always be a poison to you if there is too much of it.'

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As we stood
under the sunlight
in a meadow
we made a vow
to love each other always.
We made a vow that would last forever,
or so I thought.
Never did I know
what fate would bring
to make a rift
in our promise.
Now I stand on the meadow
where we made our vow
All alone.
Alone with an empty space next to me
where you used to be.

© Allison F., Langhorne, PA

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I'm back, people! For the first time in a while! I wrote this a long time ago and now I've finally decided to publish it here :)
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