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drowning

November 27, 2013
By Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;If you&#039;re losing your soul and you know it, then you&#039;ve still got a soul left to lose&rdquo; <br /> ― Charles Bukowski


I'm drowning
In unspoken thoughts
And
Dying
For
The
Libel
But I can't find
Equilibrium
Among my regrets and
My sorrows,
If
They
Even
Ever
Even
Out
Because even my sorrows
Have regrets,
And my regrets sorrows,
So
I
Feed
The
Monster.



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on Dec. 12 2013 at 10:00 pm
TargonTheDragon GOLD, Ofallon, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
First dentistry was painless.<br /> Then bicycles were chainless,<br /> Carriages were horseless,<br /> And many laws enforceless.<br /> <br /> Next cookery was fireless,<br /> Telegraphy was wireless,<br /> Cigars were nicotineless,<br /> And coffee caffeineless.<br /> <br /> Soon oranges were seedless,<br /> The putting green was weedless,<br /> The college boy was hatless,<br /> The proper diet fatless.<br /> <br /> New motor roads are dustless,<br /> The latest steel is rustless,<br /> Our tennis courts are sodless,<br /> Our new religion &mdash; godless.

the last line reminds me of a song by Red called "Feed the Machine." i think it holds similar meaning as this poem. at least it does in the sense that i interpreted it.     i feel like that made no sense at allXD