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The Gush Of Thoughts

October 1, 2015
By Purvi BRONZE, Bhilai, Other
Purvi BRONZE, Bhilai, Other
3 articles 1 photo 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The leaves of memories, seem to make a mournful rustling in the night."


The long, ruthless day just passed,

Thoughts, screems and pain did outlast,

The aeons of the lackadaisical day.

 

I succumbed to the thoughts, trembling with agitation;

I stumbled, I fell, I got up

I tried to walk thorugh the explosion

 

My mind was flooding, it was gone

And I ? I was only spinning Around;

Perhaps, my doomsday was here so profound.

 

I was just drowning into quicksand,

Or falling down a sinkhole;

Whatever it was, it felt like a downfall.

 

Inside my cranium,into my heart

There were chills, forewarning a Blast.

 

Suddenly Blood disembogued,

Eyes wide open, I saw

In my heart, A Hole.

 

The tears within, the agony

The countless thoughts and the misery,

In a second, I was free

As i poured my heart out ;Clean.


The author's comments:

Sometimes, like the black clouds filled with water, our minds and our hearts are overloaded with thoughts. In such situations the bursting of the cloud is necessary. One day I saw the sky filled with dark heavy black clouds and as I compared the heaviness of the clouds with a human's heart, I found that the two things are quite similar. Both the things need to let go; Rain and Thoughts. As a day passes we tend to fill up the pressure within us, slowly it starts to eat us up and we need to let it go before all the thoughts gush out on their own.


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on Dec. 17 2016 at 4:34 am
It is really nice to read

on Dec. 17 2016 at 4:34 am
It is really nice to read

on Dec. 17 2016 at 4:34 am
It is really nice to read

on Dec. 17 2016 at 4:34 am
It is really nice to read

Purvi BRONZE said...
on Oct. 4 2015 at 2:40 am
Purvi BRONZE, Bhilai, Other
3 articles 1 photo 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The leaves of memories, seem to make a mournful rustling in the night."

Thankyou so much. Appreciation is like a push to do better. :D

on Oct. 3 2015 at 11:07 pm
Nadia.A PLATINUM, North Vancouver, Other
24 articles 1 photo 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Find what you love and let it kill you." -Charles Bukowski

Truly beautiful! I especially love the description in the fourth stanza.

Veena said...
on Oct. 3 2015 at 2:39 pm
U have got a great talent as a writer ..
Loved the poem