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I Love You

January 12, 2018
By OnyxBaby BRONZE, Longmont, Colorado
OnyxBaby BRONZE, Longmont, Colorado
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Us


I am fading.
Tears.
Heartbreak.
Loneliness.
Forgotten.
Clouds.
Depression.
Then you.
Crying.
Tears of joy.
Together.
Love.
Happy.
World.
Us.
Then I leave you.
You bury me under your favorite tree.
You sob for days and days.
Nothing will make you better.
You lose a pound a day.
I feel terrible.
The next morning, you see my favorite treat waiting for you.
You smile, and my work here is done.
I love you.


The author's comments:

A lot of people think rats are terrible, dirty, stinking creatures.  They're not.  I had pet rats, and this made me think of what rats in pet stores, or in sewers, felt like.  I really want people to change their opinions about rats, because they're not bad at all.


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