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Moving On MAG

September 29, 2008
By Anonymous

I finally threw
Out all the poems that I wrote
About you today

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Tremendous said...
on Dec. 24 2011 at 10:18 pm
out/all/the/po/ems/that/I/wrote. Looks like eight to me.
SpringMoon98 GOLD said...
on Dec. 9 2011 at 5:22 pm
SpringMoon98 GOLD, Ava, New York
11 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Everyone wants to change the world, but do they ever stop to think about changing themselves?&quot; <br /> Leo Tolstoy

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How is there eight in the second line?
ManekiNeko SILVER said...
on Dec. 9 2011 at 8:50 am
ManekiNeko SILVER, Cincinnati, Ohio
8 articles 1 photo 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;It is better to keep your mouth shut and be thought a fool than to open it and prove it to be true.&quot;

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You have 8 syllables in the second line.
shizuka BRONZE said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 4:33 pm
shizuka BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
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and the picture really matches the poem :D really love them both
shizuka BRONZE said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 4:31 pm
shizuka BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
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i agree, this is one of the amazing works ever
mattuglyface said...
on Nov. 21 2011 at 9:33 am
I LIKEY DA SHLONG
mattuglyface said...
on Nov. 21 2011 at 9:29 am
shlong!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Beautifulmonsta BRONZE said...
on Nov. 17 2011 at 10:31 pm
Beautifulmonsta BRONZE, New Bedford, Massachusetts
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i was just about to say the same thing lol
Countrylife4 GOLD said...
on Nov. 8 2011 at 8:35 am
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I loved that! Great Job!! :D
WithEyesWideOpen BRONZE said...
on Oct. 29 2011 at 11:54 am
WithEyesWideOpen BRONZE, Wayne, Pennsylvania
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that's what a haiku is supposed t be..
midnight_howl said...
on Oct. 26 2011 at 12:52 pm
!.........That was short......!
weasel123 said...
on Sep. 6 2011 at 10:42 am
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I like this poem because almost ever one in this world has had a hardship and how they need to move on. Good poem.
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 29 2011 at 5:11 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Strong, independent, emotional. You, my dear, know how to write an haiku, even though it doesn't have any nature in it ;)
Milly.Hester BRONZE said...
on Aug. 21 2011 at 2:19 pm
Milly.Hester BRONZE, Central City, Kentucky
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wow...

 

Jessi_suarez1 GOLD said...
on Aug. 16 2011 at 8:50 pm
Jessi_suarez1 GOLD, Kissimmee, Florida
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just remove that. but overall i love it! very independent and inpowering. good job!
HannahMarie17 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 30 2011 at 7:29 pm
HannahMarie17 BRONZE, Pasadena, Maryland
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I need to do what this author did. I completely liove and feel this piece. Keep writing!

 

A.M.Wilson DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 19 2011 at 1:26 pm
A.M.Wilson DIAMOND, Midland, Texas
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this is indeed a good poem

 

Tongue_Blep PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 16 2011 at 10:45 am
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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Great job! I just wrote two books called nightstalker and the beast. please check them out and read them, and make sure u post comments! Thanks! :D (sorry for advertizing!)
NEVER_Perfect SILVER said...
on Jul. 14 2011 at 12:32 pm
NEVER_Perfect SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
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I love this.. & I remember a day i did the same. Those 3 words show a new beginninq to a different part of life. Great Job :)
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 13 2011 at 3:16 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
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&quot;I can do anything!&quot;

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Could you look at my haiku poems Doubt, All Alone, and Seeing Your Soul, please? Thank you!