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Devil, Here I Come

March 21, 2022
By WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
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WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
117 articles 1 photo 190 comments

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"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

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My tears are falling,
My fate is calling,
I'm ready to give in,
And let them win.
The devil can have me,
No hope I can see,
I'm to broken,
To be woken. 
Help never arrived,
I'm so deprived,
No one cares,
As I swear,
To end my life.
I'm so done,
Devil, here I come.

© Juliana E., Walton, Kentucky

The author's comments:

Visit www.teenink.com/HealthResources if you or a loved one are feeling depressed or suicidal.

This is was made in my darkest times and I share it to tell you, you're not alone.

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Samhradh GOLD said...
on Jul. 24 2022 at 12:02 pm
Samhradh GOLD, Carlisle, Pennsylvania
18 articles 2 photos 61 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dá fhada an lá tagann an tráthnóna.<br /> <br /> (No matter how long the day, evening comes)

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Very well written, you have a strong writer’s voice
WolvesRain ELITE said...
on Mar. 24 2022 at 3:58 pm
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
117 articles 1 photo 190 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

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Thanks so much for the kind words!
Afra ELITE said...
on Mar. 24 2022 at 9:27 am
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
103 articles 7 photos 1824 comments

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"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

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This is so melancholic but still, you've written it really well...I love how you've maintained the rhyme pattern...☆☆☆