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Bleed [A Song]
July 7, 2009
Just Let Go.
Did you see me?
Did you see me cry?
Will you watch me?
Will you watch me die?
LET GO.
Did you love me?
Or was it a lie?
Did you need me?
Or was I just a good time?
Well Now.
We’ll find out.
I stand here.
Split Open.
Tears Streaming.
Blood Flowing.
BLEED.
BLEED.
JUST BLEED.
ILL BLEED.
COME ON COME ON,
DO YOU LOVE ME?
As I,
BLEED.
Will you just watch
ME?
Will you walk
AWAY.
Or will you stop the
FLOW?
Darlin’ will you
STAY?
AS I BLEED.
Blood.
Crimson red.
Color of roses.
Color of death.
Hold me or let me go?
No more games,
Ive got to
KNOW.
Come on Come on.
You gonna stop the flow?
Come on Come on.
Let me know.
Don’t have much time.
Tell me please,
Before I die.
Wont you hold me close?
As I
BLEED.
I cant
BREATHE.
As I
BLEED.
So,
PLEASE.
As I,
BLEED.
Don’t Leave Me In The Dark…
LET GO.
© Adam B., Highland Village, TX
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This article has 181 comments.
rebeldiamond1313kd GOLD said...
on Nov. 25 2009 at 8:33 pm
I don;t have much else to say besides what everyone else already said, but it sounds very alternatiove/emo and like the kind of song I would put on repeat in my room at night.
Like many other people, I really wish I could hear it sung. Even if you don;t sing and record it, you should try to get someone else to record it for you who sings screamo. I would totally buy it!
But anyways I felt it. It was very good. I love it!
Like many other people, I really wish I could hear it sung. Even if you don;t sing and record it, you should try to get someone else to record it for you who sings screamo. I would totally buy it!
But anyways I felt it. It was very good. I love it!
XXXemoprincessXXX said...
on Nov. 17 2009 at 10:49 am
Yawb...sounds like my life story... I love it... </3
rocker_grl96** said...
on Nov. 15 2009 at 1:44 pm
awesome. sounds like its got a rockin' beat and... a lot of screamin. keep writin.
Schubster said...
on Sep. 27 2009 at 7:17 pm
GREAT SONG!!! I wish I could hear it sung, too.....and I wish I could write songs at all. haha, keep up the great work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
check out my work?
check out my work?
emo.panda101 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 19 2009 at 7:02 pm
i could feel ur pain like it was my own i started crying cause i want to know if he really even loved me but wow this is great
RadioShower PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 15 2009 at 5:33 pm
Wow that was intense! GO YOU! Wish i could hear it sung.
GLee said...
on Sep. 13 2009 at 12:52 pm
nice. i like it
AngelForeverBleedingLove DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 13 2009 at 11:13 am
This is beautifully written. I can feel your words, and that is a good thing when you write a song. Bravo!
antionette12345 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 10 2009 at 2:22 pm
i really like this i just wanted to know could you write me a song and sent it to [email protected].
kaylababy07 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 8 2009 at 4:57 am
wow, i wish i could write like this.
it is really good :)
it is really good :)
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 8 2009 at 12:10 am
according to my friends, my music teacher, and the one soloist competition I have been in I have a decent voice. I cant honestly tell you either way whether im good or not, im basically my greatest critic...Im a bit rough on this song because its mostly kind of screamo......and thats something i have to work on...but thanks for the comment glad u liked it and glad you think itd be something you would listen to =]
sadie912 said...
on Sep. 4 2009 at 9:06 pm
luv this!sounds like something i would listen 2. can u sing tho??jw
jennee21_ann GOLD said...
on Sep. 4 2009 at 2:22 pm
i'm kinda disappointed other people got to this piece before me...because they have already said everything there is to say about this piece :) it is truly amazing, awesome, excellent, deep, heartfelt...and sooo much more <3 it is just so great, so sad and sooo touching. sorry my comment is so long, i just want you to know how awesome of a writer you seem to be!!
Lonleydandy said...
on Jul. 15 2009 at 2:34 pm
WOW....WOW....WOW....WOW. It was really good, it has so much emotion behind it. WOW....WOW....WOW....WOW!!!!!!!
