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February 8, 2014
By Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
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Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
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&ldquo;If you&#039;re losing your soul and you know it, then you&#039;ve still got a soul left to lose&rdquo; <br /> ― Charles Bukowski

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i'd lie down with dogs a thousand
times over before i'd
ever
return to you(r bed), and i hope you
know that you are just
as vain
as your "efforts"

© Samantha S., Flower Mound, TX

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Jade.I.Am ELITE said...
on Jun. 3 2014 at 11:09 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;If you&#039;re losing your soul and you know it, then you&#039;ve still got a soul left to lose&rdquo; <br /> ― Charles Bukowski

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Wow, thank you! That's exactly what I was going for :) thanks for reading.
Brisa PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 2 2014 at 4:47 am
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Short, incisive and yet tells a story. The feeling I get from your spacing, diction and lowercase"i" is one of smooth disdain and distant, cold "over you"-ness. Great job man :) loved how short you kept it. It made the tone that much more intense.