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The Meaning of Love? MAG

November 8, 2008
By Kiana Baker GOLD, Alto, Texas
Kiana Baker GOLD, Alto, Texas
12 articles 0 photos 2 comments

The beating of my broken heart, now chained and locked away,
I hear much louder, through the night, than words we never say.
As hollow kisses turn to dust and fall against my skin,
I pray that I might find the strength to fall in love again.
Abandoned innocence, stripped away, discarded on the floor.
In the dirt, I bury hope that love leaves unlocked doors.
I am held, though never cherished, yet to be made whole.
My tears can wipe themselves away, but I must save my soul.
Bare feet, run, lead me home, where I am Mother’s child,
And toward the pale rose sunset for a pretty little while.
If broken wings may carry dreams, and carry me to sleep,
Take me far away from love and tell me what it means.


The author's comments:
Writing is my passion … I hope you enjoy my poem!

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OneChance GOLD said...
on Feb. 22 2010 at 10:17 am
OneChance GOLD, Westland, Michigan
18 articles 8 photos 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥be who YOU want to be, not what OTHERS want to see. ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

you are the greatest poet i have reads work so far... you inspired me to write a poem, and its actually really good..thanx!!!

BriiF PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 16 2010 at 1:09 pm
BriiF PLATINUM, Akeley, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"He who spends time regretting the past loses the present and risks the future." ~Francisco de Quevedo "You shall love your crooked neighbor with your crooked heart." ~W.H. Auden

Wow. I really like the way you showed the way you were feeling, instead of telling it. Keep writing, please!

on Feb. 13 2010 at 4:18 pm
luvinlife519 SILVER, Wilson, North Carolina
8 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Your sidewalk is your runway"

write with your heart. i feel your passion, and it's wonderful! Keep writing, it'll take you far. read mine pls.

on Feb. 12 2010 at 5:55 pm
kaitlyn4 SILVER, Keller, Texas
6 articles 1 photo 7 comments
wow, this should be number 1!

on Feb. 12 2010 at 12:24 am
HeadshotM SILVER, Melbourne, New York
7 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your failure is my success

lol

limerick should have 5 lines

on Feb. 11 2010 at 9:31 pm
hiddenemotions BRONZE, Fort Worth, Texas
4 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be yourself!!

oh my gosh!! that was the best one ive read so far it should be number 1!!!

shortyy101 said...
on Feb. 11 2010 at 6:00 pm
Every Word Reminds Me Of What I Went Through Back In 7th Grade...Overall I Enjoyed This Poem

on Feb. 11 2010 at 9:44 am
gymnast101 BRONZE, Nottingham, Maryland
3 articles 1 photo 24 comments
awesome job. It is short and full of feeling

AMJaeh DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 10 2010 at 1:18 pm
AMJaeh DIAMOND, Gallatin, Tennessee
51 articles 80 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
you don&#039;t have to understand the language to know its Poetik written Muzyk~PoetikMuzyk<br /> Not Everything is ours to keep, no matter how hard we had to fight for it~PoetikMuzyk<br /> &lrm;&quot;The face of my enemy only frightens me when I see how much it resembles mine&quot;<br /> - Stanislaw J. Lec<br /> <br /> a few neurons can make us all a morons dont you think?

WOW...that is amazing...I LOVE IT!!!!...you have an incredible talent...maybe in time my talent will be as great as this

Skeezics GOLD said...
on Feb. 9 2010 at 11:03 pm
Skeezics GOLD, Eatonville, Washington
12 articles 0 photos 87 comments

Favorite Quote:
A childs voice, however honest and true, is meaningless to those who have forgotten how to listen.<br /> Everyone faces obsticals. What defines you is how you overcome them. -J.R. Celski

This poem is amazing. It is one of the best i have ever read. I love how it flows.

monkeygirl14 said...
on Feb. 5 2010 at 11:42 pm
This poem is about how lots of people feel and it really touched me. You are a fantastic writer. Keep writing and have fun.

on Feb. 5 2010 at 11:26 pm
SassieCassie322 BRONZE, Encino, California
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this is such an amazing poem. it really touched my heart and inspired me.

JennaBeth said...
on Feb. 5 2010 at 10:52 pm
JennaBeth, Morrison, Oklahoma
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WOW! I really loved this poem!!!!

iLuVelMo said...
on Feb. 5 2010 at 10:00 pm
beautiful poem..... it really touched ME!!!!

on Feb. 5 2010 at 8:37 pm
forget_me_not SILVER, Chesapeake, Virginia
8 articles 0 photos 30 comments
wow. incredible.

YoshiBaby said...
on Feb. 5 2010 at 7:06 pm
YoshiBaby, Manteca, California
0 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Falling in love is just falling and sooner or later your just gonna hit the ground and shatter into a million pieces!&quot;

really good...it touched my heart and i loved every word in it!!! Keep up the AMAZING work...love it! <3 [:

on Feb. 5 2010 at 6:27 pm
LeslieAnn BRONZE, Midvale, Utah
1 article 0 photos 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\\\\\&quot;Dream as if you\\\\\\\&#039;ll live forever, Live as if you\\\\\\\&#039;ll die today\\\\\\\&quot; \\\\\\\&quot;Life is not about waiting for the storms to pass, its about learning to dance in the rain.\\\\\\\&quot;

So amazing and so deep

nikki said...
on Feb. 5 2010 at 6:23 pm
best poem i've ever read i just loveeeeeeeee itttt.....:)

on Feb. 5 2010 at 6:10 pm
noelleism PLATINUM, Russellville, Alabama
24 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can not dwell on the past, and I will not live on what the future may hold, but yet take comfort and find perpose in the second yet to come.

I thought you poem was very beautifully writen. Your words leave me silent. I love the pale rose sunset and bare feet bit. But the part about 'Abandoned inocence, stripped away, discarded on the floor.' makes me feel sad, like love isn't real. It's just about loosing you inocence, getting hurt and looking for love again like an on going cycle of stupidity. Life is more than just stranded love lifes. But I really think you have a way with words. Keep Up the beauty. :)

on Feb. 5 2010 at 4:18 pm
sarahcarp63 DIAMOND, Denver, Colorado
51 articles 2 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
&#039;The really important people in life have a way of coming back to you&#039;<br /> &#039;Good enough isn&#039;t good enough&#039;<br /> &#039;You don&#039;t have to be sick to get better&#039;<br /> &#039;Come what may and love it&#039;

Your poem touches my soul and triggers symathy from my heart