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The Meaning of Love? MAG

November 8, 2008
By Kiana Baker GOLD, Alto, Texas
Kiana Baker GOLD, Alto, Texas
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The beating of my broken heart, now chained and locked away,
I hear much louder, through the night, than words we never say.
As hollow kisses turn to dust and fall against my skin,
I pray that I might find the strength to fall in love again.
Abandoned innocence, stripped away, discarded on the floor.
In the dirt, I bury hope that love leaves unlocked doors.
I am held, though never cherished, yet to be made whole.
My tears can wipe themselves away, but I must save my soul.
Bare feet, run, lead me home, where I am Mother’s child,
And toward the pale rose sunset for a pretty little while.
If broken wings may carry dreams, and carry me to sleep,
Take me far away from love and tell me what it means.


The author's comments:
Writing is my passion … I hope you enjoy my poem!

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on Dec. 23 2009 at 9:43 am
MssyBunniQ22 BRONZE, Psl, Florida
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3 words, I LOVE IT!!!!!!

RaMay42 SILVER said...
on Dec. 23 2009 at 12:53 am
RaMay42 SILVER, Harvest, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;I love writing. I love the swirl and swing of words as they tangle with human emotions.&rdquo; <br /> ~James Michener

Absolutely beautiful. Breathtaking. The feeling and emotion you threaded into this piece is flawless and it is relatable to everybody. Keep up the great worl! :D

katie35 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 22 2009 at 1:01 pm
katie35 BRONZE, Centennial, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Deep quote to make me seem wise.&quot; -a profound person

AMAZING. I absolutely love it!

kheart SILVER said...
on Dec. 19 2009 at 7:07 pm
kheart SILVER, Union Grove, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Every second is countless. Every minute is different. When you came around.&quot; -kheart

This is my favorite poem on this website!

Panther BRONZE said...
on Dec. 19 2009 at 6:21 am
Panther BRONZE, Madison Hts, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
You dont know how much u love someone until they are gone

I know how you feel my heart hurts too. I like this one b/c its beatiful and i can relate to it. I like how you describe what you are feeling

on Dec. 16 2009 at 8:33 pm
The_Girl_Next_Door PLATINUM, Elkins, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
~*The mind has but a thousand eyes, and the heart is left with one...Yet the light of a whole life dies the moment love is done.*~

I can feel what you're feeling. (Kind of).

Keep expressing yourself. I could relate to this stuff :) Keep it up.

on Dec. 11 2009 at 10:48 pm
Lucrecia SILVER, Phoenix, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;No act of love is ever wasted&quot;. Geneen Roth<br /> <br /> &quot;Love not what you are, but what you may become&quot;. Miguel de Cervantes

this is beautiful

on Dec. 11 2009 at 2:40 pm
xenon333 PLATINUM, Billerica, Massachusetts
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Oh my gosh. You are a talent. I love this poem!!

on Dec. 6 2009 at 4:45 pm
abooga.looga SILVER, Covina, California
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love it. i could feel all the emotion.

on Dec. 4 2009 at 8:37 am
babigerl1194 PLATINUM, Margaretville, New York
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Favorite Quote:
wat doesnt kill you only makes you stronger

this is intense, i could feel the emotion, and now im inspired

lenalee BRONZE said...
on Dec. 1 2009 at 11:01 pm
lenalee BRONZE, Adel, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
I promise, someday when you are alone, you will think of me and say, that girl really DID love me.

this is amazing you are really good!

Bobbi PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 1 2009 at 9:58 pm
Bobbi PLATINUM, Terry, Mississippi
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I really liked this... it's beautiful!!

Niki said...
on Dec. 1 2009 at 9:28 pm
very nice writing

Rimbaud BRONZE said...
on Dec. 1 2009 at 8:10 pm
Rimbaud BRONZE, Roche, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Do I dare disturb the universe?

your wrong. love doesnt exist. Selfishness exists.... fear exists.... attatchment based on personal gain exists.... but not love. No. Love needs to be reinvented

on Dec. 1 2009 at 7:58 pm
i-am-nicole-ashley GOLD, Hutchinson, Minnesota
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Amazing! I love it.

on Dec. 1 2009 at 7:06 pm
This is the most amazing thing I have ever read. I just....um....lost love today, though I'm sure it was gone before and I just refused to notice it. But this explains everything I couldn't figure out. It's absolutely perfect. You did an amazing job. Keep writing...

on Dec. 1 2009 at 3:59 pm
FlamableFyre DIAMOND, Spartanburg, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
I don&#039;t have ambitions or desires. <br /> Being a poet isn&#039;t my ambition, <br /> it&#039;s my way of being alone.<br /> ~ Fernando Pessoa ~

Wonderful, absolutely wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!

on Dec. 1 2009 at 3:28 pm
ohxXxEkkoxXx GOLD, Sanatoga, Pennsylvania
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Absolutely fantastic I love it!

on Nov. 27 2009 at 1:26 pm
Dunkelheitstieg BRONZE, Baldwin, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The poet ranks far below the painter in the representation of visible things, and far below the musician in that of invisible things. Why does the eye see a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination when awake?,&quot;Leonardo da Vinci.

I'm not trying to be mean but aren't limericks supposed to be funny\ammusing? Good poem, though.

meli said...
on Nov. 26 2009 at 11:23 pm
u will love again if u give ur whole heart 2 god and in a few months u will notice a diffrence in ur life but 2 see that u have 2 change and have faiTH......=]=]

been a christian is the best thing i will never give up it changed me completly 2 a better person......=]=] try it...